Hey made a new hiphop beat for an artist of mine, the concept behind it is how good he is at writing/rapping , so I recorded some scribbling with a pencil and chopped up some vocals of him to use in the chorus. I know the chorus is not the best right now, I did all the vocal arrangement in reason, so I was limited, but I'll change that. Also I wanted the drums to be kinda crazy but keep the instruments I use fairly simple. Anyway tell me what you guys think!

Here it is:
http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11...0The%20Pen.mp3

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I thought it was pretty cool, but IMHO the piano would have been better if it had echo/delay at 3/16 or something... But that's the only thing I would have changed.

Pretty cool

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You know what titan I did end up putting a little more reverb on it but I like the idea of the delay, haven't thought of that. Thanks for the feedback.

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Actually echo would work better as 3/16 delay, as delay would make the piano start at the wrong beats.

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True that! thanks again


Oh yeah by the way I got skype up an running FINALLY

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lol cool - just remembered - can Reason 4 work with NINJAM using ASIO4all? I haven't figured out how to configure it right, I was wondering if you knew?

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It supposed to, but I have no idea how to use that program lol.

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I'd like to speed the piano up, so it gets through its riff a little faster/more often! I think it's a tad too slow for the beat right now. But I loved the rapper's voice, he's got a good voice for rap.

ulrichburke (complete newbie, so what am I doing criticising others!?!)