I love hip-hop beats so i've tried to make something myself. I made a drum kit and engineered it myself, but I think I might have some eq issues...

anyway, i was wondering if anyone could give me any tips on what would make this more... catchy.

Thanks.

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Okay are you asking for advice on the whole track? Or just the drums?

I like bass drum, maybe change the tone down a bit (or the pitch). As for the snare, uhhhhh not feelin' it I'd say a completely new snare drum. As I like that second instrument you did with the matrix (or maybe arp)? But the first one, not so much. Just honest feedback. But! I do think this track has potential, if you can post the rns file and I'll do what I think is best, which may not be right. Not saying I'm an expert. but then you'll see how I eq'd your track and you may be able to gain some knowledge in the process. Tell me what you think

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lost the rns file!

but yeah, the snare wasn't as clean as it should have been. It sounded okay when everything was together,but at the beginning it didn't really work.

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