Anybody else write some hot lyrical stuff? Maybe we can get a contest going.

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Oh yeah, theres also a little text tourny over at futureproducers, an other forum you guys might like. Here's the link to the thread of the tourny:
http://www.futureproducers.com/forum...d.php?t=191679

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im writing a lil bit but only german

Well if yall want to have a little writing lyrical contest, I'm up for it.

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thats that it is im always up for a friendly competition....so who's going to start it off ?

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veamos
con los ojos un poco cansados
lo que denominamos nuestro mundo,
eso a lo que reducimos el mundo:
deshaciéndonos primero
de aquello que no somos:
comunicación y moda
rapidez e interés.
la densidad se hará polvo
y lo turbio
se irá difuminando,
en espuma fina y arbitraria.
La coherencia de lo que llamamos nuestra vida
cederá
tarde
o
temprano.
El sentido de nosotros mismos
cobrará
otro valor.
Autos y casas y oficinas
el smog y el pago.
Y la cafetera, si la hay,
podrá subir al trono.
Igual agua natural y whisky…
el sillón.
Un cigarro para mi.
Pájaros grises, desdoblándose del pavimento.
No lámparas y no acción.
No jardines y no pasión.
Cuartos sucios imperceptiblemente,
solamente eso y una musiquilla de violines.
No teléfonos ni concentración
Cometidos no ni juicio,
ni juicio de valor.
Al perder ínfimamente el interés al mundo,
a eso que llamamos nuestro mundo,
caen los principales al comienzo, eso es todo.
—apenas, apenas con los ojos un poco cansados.
no risa ni valor,
no opiniones ni atención.
Solamente televisores en la casa de al lado
rumores alejados,
mordiscos de ratón.

Hey, what do ya think?
Darbo

Is this what you wrote??

let's see
with the a little tired eyes
what we name our world,
that to what we limit the world:
coming undone first
of what we are not,
communication and fashion
rapidity and interest.
the thickness will do to itself dust
and the cloudy thing
it will be fading away,
in thin and arbitrary froth.
The coherence of what we call our life
it will yield
late
or
early.
The sense of us ourselves
he will charge
another value.
Cars and houses and offices
the smog and the payment.
And the coffee pot, if it is,
it will be able sub

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"let's see
with little bit tired eyes
that what we call our world"

i think, and everything else looks that is ok, thanks very much. (Now that i read it in english i thing it seems more interesting, jajaj!)

Darbo

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